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Post by Sunshine on Oct 6, 2011 14:58:50 GMT
On my cold isle, the lack of sun Depressing greyness, damp Cold and wet, miserable Into the heat, artificial, dry...
Give me sunshine, gloriously warm Heat me, feed me, with the energy you give Turn my skin to a healthy colour Bleach my hair to a golden hue...
The sun though mighty is dangerous too For pale skinned Aryans anon; Skin blemishes form, the skin blisters Rehydration, water, salt, oil necessities..
Father Sun keeps the plants alive Through process of chemical change Creates glorious greenery all around Feeds animals, insects, life forever...
Without the sun, gravity would not exist Keeping a perfect balance; Without the sun, life would cease; With it, life abounds for ever....
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Post by Daphne on Oct 6, 2011 17:54:51 GMT
Welcome to Daphne's NPS site! This is an interesting poem - I can see you are a sunlover, if not even a sunworshipper... I look forward to some even sunnier poems! Don't forget to (1) comment on other members' items, and (2) recommend the site to your friends.
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Post by annettecurtain on Oct 7, 2011 8:49:24 GMT
And (3) consider moving to Australia.
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justfred
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Post by justfred on Oct 9, 2011 17:43:04 GMT
Australia? Ive not been down under for 20 years.
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Post by alex on Oct 24, 2011 16:34:54 GMT
I doubt you'd remember what to do Freddie.
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Post by Daphne on Oct 24, 2011 16:39:46 GMT
I fear there's a double entendre here.
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Post by Sunshine on Oct 27, 2011 14:46:07 GMT
Please keep your comments to my poem and please don't be smutty.
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Post by alex on Oct 28, 2011 0:29:07 GMT
Your poem's crap though, Sunshine!
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Post by Daphne on Oct 28, 2011 11:01:29 GMT
Harsh but with some element of verissimilitude.
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Post by alex on Oct 28, 2011 21:08:33 GMT
Harsh but with some element of verissimilitude. I think you may mean 'verisimilitude', Daphers! ;D
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Post by Daphne on Oct 30, 2011 2:01:14 GMT
You are correct. That's what I meant. I was pissed at the time.
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Post by Sunshine on Jul 16, 2014 9:56:27 GMT
Please don't use profanities on my poems.
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