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Post by Rosetta on Feb 24, 2012 17:00:26 GMT
I'm still trying to work things out: If you thought of my pain and its amount When you decided to go ahead and end it all. What could've been your reason for making that call?
Did I not treat you the best I simply could? Did you not feel as much love as anyone should? I literally gave you everything I had At the end surely you felt rather sad.
All I want to know is if you even thought of me I gave you all my heart for you to throw away the key. How could you just do it after all the time You spent trying to convince me you were mine?
Years together all thrown to waste, You've forever left my mouth with a sour taste. Can you see me from wherever you are? Do you ever wonder if you went too far?
It's taking me all this time to recover As the sight of your last breath stayed to hover Over my heavy heart as though your ghost had entered my very soul. Without you I am unable to be whole.
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Post by Fraser Allonby Q.C. on Mar 2, 2012 19:39:50 GMT
The last 2 lines deserve a kick in the bottom.
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Post by alex on Mar 3, 2012 1:19:50 GMT
The whole 'poem' deserves a kick in the bottom tbh, but... who are YOU to comment, 'Fraser' after your latest so called 'poems'??
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Post by Edna Sweetlove on May 6, 2012 18:37:00 GMT
Boring tripe.
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