Rip it apart!

[sadlonelyguy]

I've got this gun to your head
I've got blood on these hands
I'll be your eternal never ending
I'll be the end of your beginning
I'm the battle to your every war
I'm the first fist, of everything torn
I've got no room in this heart
Gonna tear you apart!

[Chorus]
Death to your heart
And I'll rip it apart
You've come undone
You're the weakest one
Death to your heart
and I'll rip it apart (Rip it apart)
You've come undone
You're the weakest
The weakest one

[Verse 2]
Infected with deception
Destruction is my obsession
I'll feed off your sweet suffering
Your confession is my sweet crime
You've fed me up with your lies
Thought I knew you deep inside
So when I take this razor to your neck
I'll cut out all your regrets
I've got no room in this heart
Gonna tear you apart!

[Chorus]
Death to your heart
And I'll rip it apart
You've come undone
You're the weakest one
Death to your heart
and I'll rip it apart (Rip it apart)
You've come undone
You're the weakest
The weakest one!

[Bridge]
Tear apart what is left
Your blood is what I taste
Here I am in the flesh
Meet your killer in the face
HaHaHa, HeHeHe
What a pretty little sight
Now you're gone, it's too late
We will never be the same

Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh (Rip it apart)
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh

Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh (The weakest one)
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh

Death to your little precious heart
This is the scene where you depart
No one will hear your finally words
I'm a life taker, I'm a heart breaker!

[Chorus]
Death to your heart
And I'll rip it apart
You've come undone
You're the weakest one
Death to your heart
and I'll rip it apart (Rip it apart)
You've come undone
You're the weakest
The weakest one!

[Daphne]

This is bloody rubbish. However, please do not be offended at my frankness. Maybe I am old enough to be your granny.

[alex]

I also think it's bloody rubbish, and can't even be bothered to read past the first chorus. Your username seems very apt though.

[Daphne]

Ha! Ha! Ha!
Seriously though, don't lets piss him off too much as we need to retain members.

Dear SadLonelyguy - your first 2 postings were so good, what a pity this one is poor. Keep posting! Why not comment on my poems as revenge?

[alex]

oops, yes, sorry!

I DO quite like this bit.... but wondered why you capitalised all the Uhs :/

''Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh (Rip it apart)
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh

Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh (The weakest one)
Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh-Uh''

You're welcome to comment on my poems as well. They're actually quite similar in poetic content to your own.