Gotta pay the cost

[sadlonelyguy]

Looking darkly so far down
..........crying sadly with a frown
Yet are my tears so deep
..........fearing waking from sleep
Let me be happy and full of joy
..........I can make it this time boy,
But maybe hope is lost
..........But who's gonna pay the cost?

[Daphne]

Welcome to Daphne's website, sadlonelyguy! This is such a sad poem - but I have to say I don't like madeup comic-book words like "wanna", "gotta", "gonna" and so on. Don't spoil your poems with such stuff. You (and we) deserve better.

[Wee Angus McWordy]

Ah wept intae my trews.

[Orlok]

These are the least of your troubles.

[alex]

what's with all the dots? I can't understand all the dots.

I like the poem, without the bloody dots...........................................................................