this is REAL (maybe)

[sammy2shoes]

sweetly you kiss my cheek,
as we lie down to sleep,
I know tomorrow when I rise,
you will be there by my side,
maybe.

If tomorrow the weather is bad,
I'm depressed and feeling sad,
even if I start to cry,
you will be there by my side,
maybe.

You always have and always will,
no matter what the cost,
but please don't forget dear,
I am still your boss,
maybe.

[alex]

Hello sammy.

May I just say that it is unusual that you should have 2 shoes instead of 1 or 3.

your poem... hmmm it's a bit all over the place, especially the last verse....

''You always have and always will,
no matter what the cost,''

you always have and always will, WHAT?

[Daphne]

In spite of the dubious language and syntactical problems here, I think we have an interesting piece of writing before us. Jolly well done, dear.