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Post by Barry Hodges, Bard of Gosforth on Oct 11, 2011 11:22:47 GMT
Some informed folks I know do declare that, at over six hundred thousand square miles, Mongolia is the nineteenth largest and yet the most sparsely populated country in the world, but that still means nearly three million Mongols, more mongos than in the entire bleeding UK. The place is crawling with goats however and some of the women look little better, (if I were sufficiently ungentlemanly to say as much). I was wandering gaily around a Ulan Bator shopping mall, with my Uncle Poo-Bah in his heavy-duty wheelchair, checking out disabled access to the red-light bars, when a gang of drunken Buddhist priests, rushed out of a nearby concrete toilet-yurt and gave old Poo-Bah a right Mongolian thumping, and we tried to run (well at least I did). But, O terrible and marginally unfair twist of fate, his wheelchair o'erturned and hurled my Nunk down a manhole into an open sewer. Dear Lord and Father of Mankind, forgive me, but I ran like ******* from that horrid place and I can assure you, dear readers one and all, I will probably not go to Mongo-land again in a hurry, especially bearing in mind the appalling exchange rate, and the smell from the noisome drains.
[edited by Daphne as it contained a slightly rude word and Daphne hates vulgarity in all its forms]
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Post by Daphne on Oct 12, 2011 19:50:54 GMT
After you wrote this specially for Alex, I think she might at least comment on it and exalt you! I liked "Mongo-land" a lot.
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Post by alex on Oct 12, 2011 22:08:09 GMT
Oops. Sorry I didn't comment on this fine poem. I have been very ill (close to death) with Mongolian Gastric Flu; my eyesight is very poor due to this and my dicky eye. 'The smell from the noisome drains' may have something to do with me and my dicky stomach as well... I've been to hell and back over the last few days.
Poor Uncle Poo-Bah, I will keep my good eye open for him and let you know if I see him as I live quite near the Ulan Bator shopping mall.
I will of course exalt you for this brilliant poem. This is the best I have read on this site so far.
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Post by Daphne on Oct 14, 2011 16:03:35 GMT
You used a naughty word here, Bazza. I hate vulgarity so I have replaced it with asterisks.
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Post by annettecurtain on Oct 16, 2011 10:21:46 GMT
Thats a lot of asterickses for f**k [edited by Daphne because rude words annoy proboards, the free provider of this website's server, and because I don't want to p*ss them off]
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Post by Daphne on Oct 21, 2011 17:23:52 GMT
The original word was b*****y. You know, botty-fun.
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